when everything else fails

Whisper

you:
one sweet evening
by the river shore
whispered sweet wordings
eyes filled with adore

i:
whispers in the air
dreams i linger there
by that river shore
feeling time for more

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8 responses

  1. Moments in time.

    September 11, 2011 at 2:47 am

  2. What a beautifully creative method of conveying a thought. I love the division of the poem into two entities. Lovely work.

    September 11, 2011 at 12:36 pm

  3. Thank you for visiting my blog and your kind words . I hope you attain all you wish for. Your spirit shines through your writing and so I have high hopes for you . Onwards and upwards!

    September 11, 2011 at 7:37 pm

  4. I like these whispers between those two. Very sweet.

    September 12, 2011 at 12:56 pm

  5. Love the contrast between the two.

    September 13, 2011 at 12:49 am

  6. your words create a gentle atmosphere here.
    stunning piece.

    Greetings: Glad to discover your blog and your poetry talent is profound.

    Poetry Rally week 51 is under the way, it would be a delight to have you in,

    A free verse or a poem of your choice is welcome!

    Bless your Wednesday!
    Hope to see you share.
    The Poetry Palace!
    xoxox

    September 15, 2011 at 3:51 am

    • thanks a lot for inviting. i really look forward to joining the next rally since i’m too late for week 51 🙂 also thanks for the encouraging words.

      September 18, 2011 at 12:52 am

  7. I can hear the whipsers tickle at my ear. Well done!!!

    September 18, 2011 at 6:04 am

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